Something truly terrible has happened and I need your help to get me through it. I lost my momentum, people.

I guess some writers might call this slump “writer’s block”, but I don’t think that is the case. I know exactly what I want to write, I have the outlines and notes all set and everything, but I have no momentum to get it done. As if the will and fire inside me fueling me to get the story out has died. I shouldn’t need to tell you how NOT GOOD that is. I lost my mojo, people! This is not something to take lightly.

Therefore, in an attempt to get me back into the burning desire of writing six hours a day in blissful seclusion, I am writing a post about the cooler aspects of the world I’m building in my novel at the moment. Because whenever I chat with friends and tell them what I’m writing, outlining the magic system and guilds and the conflict and betrayal between characters, it gets me really wanting to write again. So I thought I’d share some of the cooler details of The Black Beetles: Initiation with you. Continue reading “Momentum”

Coming at you!

Hey hey! Have I got some cool stuff to tell you. Pull up a chair and get comfy for there is some really great stuff happening that I’d love for you to read about.

I have been busy with my novel the past few days. I’m so close to the end I can actually see it. Literally, I can see the very last sentence of the epilogue and actually already have it written out. Since I’ve been writing the final climax and have been super excited about it, I’ve been writing WAY more than usual each day. I keep thinking to myself, I’m so close, if I keep writing I might actually get to finish it today. But then four hours of writing later, I’m still not there. CLOSER, but still not there. I’M SO CLOSE IT’S KILLING ME. 

My original plan was to have this novel presentable by the time I head to a writing conference next weekend. But after continuous health issues and, well, life getting in the way, I don’t think I’ll be able to pull that off. I should be able to finish the draft at least(I pray), and instead will focus on making the first few chapters as clean and enticing as possible to hand out. Should anyone be interested at the con, they’ll at least get a really well thought out and edited first few chapters. The book is called Initiation and is part of a series I plan to entitle The Black Beetles. I can’t wait to tell you about this story, and as soon as I finish the draft I’ll be writing out the synopsis in a post. I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY. It’s why I’m writing. It’s so good and it’s only the first book!


Twitter is a strange place. But it can afford some chance encounters that never would have happened otherwise. I was lucky enough to meet two bloggers through twitter who have graciously reviewed my book and written a full post about it on their sites. HOW COOL IS THAT?!? They are kind and honest people as well. Cynthia Austin highlighted every positive and every negative thing about my book, and Hollie wrote out a review for her boyfriend’s blog that is far more flattering than I deserve. I encourage you to check out each of them and take a look at the sites. Cynthia regularly reviews book at her site and Devin is a humorous guy that shares a lot of the same likes as me at Cynthia is here, while Devin wrote about me here.

I’m heading to SF:SE next weekend, and I cannot contain my excitement. A weekend by myself, in Orlando, nice hotel, three days of mingling with writers, editors, agents and publishers, and tons of panels to improve writing craft. There’s going to be some big names in writing there, as well, and I’m really looking forward to meeting some interesting people.

IN OTHER NEWS, Nonlocal Science Fiction launched their magazine today with my story featured in it! Huzzah! Hooray! Hoorah! Should anyone like a copy of it for themselves, please let me know I’ll see what I can do. If you’d like to check it out, it’s only 2.99 on amazon here and it’s good.

Well, that’s about all I’ve got off the top of my head to talk about. I would really appreciate it if you could sign up for my mailing list via the subscribe button higher up on the page. It’s nothing special, just that you’ll get notified whenever I post something on here, which as you can probably see isn’t often. But it’ll help me reach out to you and its a good way for us to stay in contact. Speaking of, I’d love to hear from you about what you think of my writing or where I’m going in general. I enjoy the feedback 🙂

Anywho, I’ll talk to you all next time. PEACE!

The Perfect Drug


Anyone itching for another review? In My Opinion, you should be. Because this post I’ll be writing about a novel I recently finished called The Perfect Drug by Hollie DeFransisco.

Hollie DeFrancisco is another author who I entered into a review exchange with, and it was an absolute pleasure to meet her. First and foremost, Hollie is actually an artist, a painter mostly, and does some incredible work. She painted the cover for her book, as well as dozens of other really breathtaking portraits. You can check out her gallery here.  Hollie does book designs for indie authors, as well as some black and white stuff. Bottom line is, she’s rather talented.

Now let’s get to the book!

Plot: The plot of the story follows a girl, who is actually a demon, as she struggles to find a place to fit in in our world. It’s a lot more than that… but that also just about sums it up. Adelice, the main character, lives in a house with a few other mythical/supernatural creatures and acts as their huntress, if you will. All of her roommates require blood to survive, but lack the murderous intent to gather it. Adelice does not. She be killing people left and right. Or did, at least.

The story begins with Adelice in a serious relationship with a guy named Trent and proceeds to show just how unstable their love really is. The beginning does take a sort of TV drama sense as it establishes characters through unenthusiastic fights and a lot of “yeah, whatever” responses. But the story picks up about halfway through when hidden plots and secondary motives arise to throw Adelice way out of her comfort zone. Though the beginning moved slowly, it really did pick up about halfway and a truly good story blossomed out of it.

Characters: As I mentioned, I really wasn’t a big fan of the characters at first in the novel, simply because they all acted like spoiled high schoolers… In my opinion. I just… yeah. It was sour in the beginning. But then one character, a witch it turns out, really started to develop into her own person. Then a few more started to show very distinct personalities as action grew and the end neared. I was much more accepting of them by the end.

Imagery: This is where the story shines. The descriptive narrative that takes place is top notch. Reading the beginning of the book impressed me in that it flowed better than a few traditionally published novels I’ve read this summer. Hollie drops some fantastic vocabulary to spice up the writing, and created a handful of extra characters that really drew my attention. It almost felt like a Hellboy movie or something, with the vast mix of different who-knows-what creatures going about their business.

Verdict: If you like paranormal/supernatural stuff with a strong Buffy the Vampire feel to it, check out this book. If anything fantasy related or remotely creepy turns you off, stay away. That is, of course, my opinion.

And if you like the read of feel like checking out more cool artwork, take a gander at Hollie’s website here and the stuff she does. You’ll find a few hidden geek references here and there that might just convince you to say hi 🙂

The Mistborn Trilogy

Welcome back to another book review! 

I shall be titling all my reviews under the category of In My Opinion, since everything written will be my own opinion. As always it’s done by yours truly, and sponsored by The Victor Foundation.

This post I’ll be covering a trilogy I started over the summer and just finished the other night by the prolific author Brandon Sanderson called Mistborn. Consisting of the books The Final Empire, The Well of Ascension, and The Hero of Ages.


The Mistborn trilogy is an epic of epic high fantasies, and regarded as one of the best works of fantasy to come out in the past decade or so by many avid readers of my generation. The story takes place in a desolate world that seems to be at the end of its life and has been rapidly approaching it for some time. There are volcanoes that spew ash into the sky constantly and every night mists creep out into the world and occupy everything. Most people are terrified of the mists, but no one knows where they come from. The world has magic in it, called Allomancy, and in a nut-shell it’s the ability to have certain powers based on “burning” different metals. If someone is able to “burn” pewter, then they get super strength. Burn tin, and enhance senses. Etc. The plot is that this world has been dominated by a Lord Ruler for a thousand years and he’s been doing a pretty awful job at it. He keeps an entire population of slaves handy for a rich society of nobles to use as they see fit.

And that, friends, is where we pick up our story.

The best way I can see to break this down is book by book, so here we go…

Book 1 – The Final Empire: This was a good book. The main characters were awesome, they grew as the story progressed, and they grew on me the more I read. At first a lot of the characters seemed too… cookie cutter? Too… already done before? They seemed like characters I had heard in dozens of other stories before and they had no uniqueness to them. But after about half way through the book, they developed their own personalities and I started to actually chuckle at a few of their conversations.

The plot was good and is pretty much the only thing that kept me going through this series. Assassinations, rebellions, wars, spies, death, betrayal. It was all there and done well. And the pacing of the plot was good, too. It didn’t drag at all, and there were equal parts contemplation by the characters, and action or conflict in the story. All in all, the first book got two thumbs up from me.

Book 2The Well of Ascension: This book sucked. Flat out, straight up, no way around it. This book was boring as hell and dragged from chapter four till the end. The plot didn’t go anywhere and took forever for anything to be resolved. I felt like so much time was wasted in reading the second book. The characters were LAME. So many chapters were pointless thoughts and ramblings of characters that were absolutely useless to their development or the overall story. The second book, I guess, opened up the world a bit more and let us see how the characters act when there is nothing to do. Which, you know, doesn’t make for a good story. I was really disappointed with the second book. To the point that I almost didn’t pick up the third. But I did.

Book 3: The Hero of Ages: First and foremost, I have to say that I went into this book with a bad attitude after reading the last one. I was not expecting much, and it turns out I wasn’t disappointed in that regard. The story picked up a little bit, but took a different direction than I hoped for and sputtered out at the end. The characters got better, much better when compared to the second book, and the pacing was actually noticeable in this one. The plot was also good again, which was a plus. But it did drag on in many places, and fell back into the habit of wasting a entire chapter for a character to ponder whether they should do something even though they know they’re going to do it in the end. It’s hard to explain, but pretty frustrating. That said, Brandon Sanderson did a good job bringing a end to the series. The action and conflict was good, the twists that I’d been waiting three books for did surprise me and I enjoyed them. The third book was a much better book than the second, but not as good as the first.

When all is said and done, I honestly probably wouldn’t recommend these books to others, unless they are hardcore readers and looking for a really big world to get into. i.e., if you’re looking to waste a lot of time. And that verdict hurts me, because I took a writing class by Brandon Sanderson and held to this belief that since he was giving awesome advice for writing and navigating the world of publishing, he must be a great writer himself. And though he is prolific as hell, his craft and prose is almost nonexistent. I was pretty let down with this series.

The world, the magic, the plot was so freaking cool. But the delivery was not able to handle it. In my opinion.